when the motion of the ocean has an inverse proportion / to this silly little notion i mistaken for devotion / these feet try to run but they move slow motion / in and out of the spell of untrusted emotion
One week self review: forced rhymes, leaned too much on a rhyming dictionary; it might be better spilt up as an entire verse, though it might be too word dence for that.
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One week self review: forced rhymes, leaned too much on a rhyming dictionary; it might be better spilt up as an entire verse, though it might be too word dence for that.
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